Learning from Mistakes

After writing and editing my package about the possible MO Bill making pseudaphedrine a prescription, I received great feed back from my professor. I need to correct a few things though.  I put to many facts in my package.  It is only 90 seconds and I think I gave the viewers to much to focus on.  My focus was how Blaine Alberty as a local pharmacist feels about this possible bill passing; however, I went off onto the electronic log that I had mentioned in my previous blog last week.  I plan to break the package into two, one being a focus on the electronic log which could help track pseudaphedrine purchases through out the state, and the other will be Alberty's reaction to this proposed bill.